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|12-08-2008 11:44 PM|
i am even less of a poetic guy so i didn't make it past line 1. wish i could be more help bud, but i never paid attention during poetry and really never "got" it.
|12-07-2008 05:48 PM|
|spok||its good, i'm not a poetic guy so my input is worthless|
|12-07-2008 03:11 AM|
here's what i have so far.
fill me in on where i should go with it.
all ideas are welcome.
opening the darkness to the light.
shiny bit's fill's the eyes.
a flip of a switch is abated through the remaining darkness,filled with the growl of a beast long wanting.
machine and flesh.
a union of satisfaction.
backdrop of white leaves me daunted........